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Secret Place

There is a secret place, out in my own time space. You have to enter in a fast pace, like you are trying to win a race. I entered through a sinking door. Inside there are many wonders galore. Many things in store. Nothing in there will be a bore. This place should be banned. No one should enter, it's surrounded by sinking sand. If they try to enter ,there punishment should be gran, they should be whipped by hand. This place is easy to forget. It seems like a threat. This place can put you in debt. So fly far away on a jet.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/7/2015 5:03:00 AM
Nice pen Kay, a secret place only known to someone where everything works your way..and we are unwelcome for its so good you don't want us destroying.. i love the poem.. nicely written***lewis
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Kay Cassio
Date: 3/7/2015 9:59:00 AM
yes thank you!!!

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