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Secret Love

I’m not gona get all wordy on you I’m not gona do look at stuff and flowers on you. I’m not gona sing in the rain and hold hands wive you I’m not gona whisper stuff and get you fings like rings. I’m not gona tell you wot you should take for granted I’m not gona get all feeley and touchy and stuff. I’m not I’m not I’m not I sharnt I won’t and you can’t make me. There that’s told you no woman’s gona snap or break me I’m hard I’m tough no woman’s gona mould or shape me. There you got your poem end of story Show this to your friends and let them ignore me. Get it got it feel the cold Now along this line you should fold------- Below this line stays below I’ve a reputation to up hold. Gossamer bumble bees and silken thread Hold these thoughts inside your head. Deep sun sinks into a bubbling sea Bare feet in hot sand you and me. Everything I said above I reverse undo and do with love. Fold again to hide the meaning See my words to you in the Sistines ceiling. Let no man brake asunder What’s been sealed by Thor and bound by thunder. You have no idea how your perfume confuses me From the way that you walk to the way you drink herbal tea. Now I’m sorry for getting all wordy on you But in my confusion I didn't know what else to do. Signed sealed and delivered with lightning My feelings for you are so strong it’s frightening.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/27/2016 4:14:00 PM
Mark, A great pleasure for me to find and read your pen today. Love ** SKAT-
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Date: 12/4/2010 9:17:00 AM
he he he! I love the way you started your poetry. It sure is a lovely way to keep things on the down low, Mark. I don't know what other wordy-ies to say to you. But, the ending was awesome,..always miss p.d.
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Date: 11/30/2010 9:58:00 AM
I liked the rhythm!
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Date: 11/22/2010 10:42:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Mark. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/21/2010 9:08:00 AM
Wow Mark, I really enjoyed this write on "secret love". You last two lines made me smile. Thank you for your comment on my work as well ;)
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Date: 11/21/2010 9:05:00 AM
Hey, this is pretty cool. Yep, your lady might want to forget the first part you were saying and fold it down, haha! Thanks for your replies to my questions, Mark. And I really enjoyed this sweet expression of love. Andrea
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Date: 11/21/2010 8:26:00 AM
You have summed up your thoughts in the last couplet very well, mark
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Date: 11/21/2010 5:59:00 AM
seem like we are all on the same subject this morning...enjoyed your write...Michael
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