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Secret Dreaming

I keep you in my thoughts throughout the day Even within each note of the soft keys I play As the water pours gently down my skin The remains of you, swirling in an insipid spin You destroyed me in an intimate fate Kept me captive in a spine tingling state Have me at your call, tease me at your beck Your heavy breaths leave imprints on my neck Whisper in my ear and bring me to my knees Let me show you that I’m the one to please Sing softly to me and let my whole body hum Whilst in this dream you got me under your thumb Hunger for you passing each waking moment Feed me, as for my heart you’ve already stole it Pull your hair back, let me lick the veins on your throat A flicker of my eyelids is all that keeps my brain afloat Look at me so softly and make my eyes succumb And keep me hostage and let my mind go numb Your tongue begins to work with mine, begin this partnership You taste like holy water, my prayers answered with every sip So whilst these dammed thoughts race through my sleep I’ll let our heavenly father believe I’m counting sheep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/17/2014 11:02:00 AM
I have a sudden urge to go to sleep! This is quite the dream! You have a wonderful imagination.
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Faith Carmichael
Date: 12/17/2014 6:01:00 PM
Thank you very much Richard!
Date: 12/13/2014 8:34:00 AM
A passionate dream indeed and really a secret one "I’ll let our heavenly father believe I’m counting sheep" . But you leave us simmering. Great poem faith.Love >>>> rajat
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Date: 12/10/2014 5:06:00 PM
Great meter and sincerity of expression Faith, enjoyed this well written piece! Keith :-)
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Date: 12/7/2014 5:07:00 PM
We all have dreams Faith, But not all as good as this one!! Good write Bless you Kevin
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