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Second Hand Love

Second hand smoke can kill you But so can second hand love Like a jumper on top of a building 'Til someone gives him a shove You compare me to the way he was Yet you never mention his name But everytime I don't stack up I'm the one that you blame I see the way you look at me With that cold and empty stare Holding me and thinking of him While wishing he was there You talk about our future While living in the past I tell you how much I love you You tell me I'm moving too fast I die a little more each day Because it's him you're thinking of It's such a painful way to die This thing, called second hand love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/14/2010 2:35:00 AM
wow! i love the first stanza..what a thought,, second hand love can kill you,, awesome,,p.d.
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Date: 11/13/2010 11:23:00 AM
Awesome, Larry. Sad but true. Excellent write. Have a great weekend. Ralph
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Date: 11/13/2010 7:43:00 AM
what an awesome piece, going straight to my favourites
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Date: 11/12/2010 11:02:00 PM
expressive emotions here, Larry, a write that bares the soul...jimbo
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