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Second Chance of An Emotion

(TSUNAMI 04) Every single minute takes an age while life drifts in haste, I close my eyes It helps to forget the pain, In wondrous ways paints a portrait an effigy of a life wasted! Yet if only I’d made you realize I loved you so, made you linger a little longer, these words would have no meaning and I, a little stronger and you, would not be the memory of my life! Yet every morning upon this shore, a second chance of an emotion a vigil to keep of a life here as we were before. Here I crave, just longing for your touch again no goodbyes only the pain, and this sad lonely old man building memories in the shifting sand, in a world I cannot, understand! © Harry J Horsman 2012

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Date: 1/18/2012 2:10:00 PM
Congrats on your winning Harry. Love, Sarah.
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Date: 1/17/2012 6:12:00 AM
Congratulations Harry on your HM in Dana'lynn's "The Secondhand Emotion" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/16/2012 11:39:00 PM
Good writing Harry, and congratulations on winning with it.
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Date: 1/16/2012 9:25:00 PM
Congrats, Mate. Good on ya! Excellent write. Enjoyed. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 1/16/2012 7:11:00 PM
well done Harry and a deserved HM. congrats to you
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Date: 1/14/2012 3:01:00 AM
how passionate! the longing, the lost, you conveyed it with open heart Harry, making this poem alive. good luck on the contest
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Date: 1/13/2012 11:46:00 AM
I definitely felt the emotion here, harry! You have such a talent in bringing that here and I that rush of emotion was definitely brought across here, I can't help but feel that regret and sadness... I wish you the best in the contest, I'm sure this will do great and thanks so much for dropping by my poems & saying what you said... I am humbled and touched by what you said there-- it is always a delight to hear from you-- keep on writing in your wonderful way :D!!
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Date: 1/13/2012 9:51:00 AM
A heartfelt write that showed deep emotion. thanks for the comment :)
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Date: 1/13/2012 7:58:00 AM
ahhh, a deep. stirring piece with lovely turn of phrases... great job, harry..:) huggs!
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Date: 1/12/2012 11:37:00 PM
hmmm, that title leads me to wonder things!! This is wonderful free verse, Harry. I really enjoyed it.
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Date: 1/12/2012 7:01:00 PM
man this reads like a winner to me Harry. It is an outstanding accomplishment of emotion descript. Wonderful
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Date: 1/12/2012 4:53:00 PM
A great write Harry , really enjoyed this my friend . Declan ...
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Date: 1/12/2012 10:24:00 AM
Good luck for you in the contest Harry! oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/12/2012 10:06:00 AM
all the best harry....wud love to see this placed in a winner's category...very very emotional....
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Date: 1/12/2012 9:26:00 AM
Harry reads like a winner to me, very moving, best of luck..David
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