Second Chance In Love

Second Chance In Love Candlelight fluttered Romance ended forever Broking the amorous vows Destinies took paths Plowed with the indifference Sowed with deep buried hatred Starting a new tale Risking a broken heart love "Unfearing abandonment" Ninth Place For Any Poem Written In July 2016 Sponsored by Laura Loo 7-18-2016

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Lu Loo

Date: 8/17/2016 1:56:00 PM

Nayda, I guess I wasn't surprised when I saw your name on the winners list! I always make sure you know how I feel about your poems. You are so great at these short ones! "unfearing abandonment"...wow...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest! :)-luloo

Pam Deremer

Date: 7/19/2016 2:30:00 PM

I really enjoyed your poem.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 7/20/2016 5:42:00 AM

Thank you Pam

Sandra Haight

Date: 7/19/2016 9:03:00 AM

Nayda, your poem is lovely and the love story flows wonderfully within your Choka form. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 7/20/2016 5:41:00 AM

Thank you Sandra