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Second Chance

When death came, I declared that I could not leave soon For I had not seen the summer flowers in bloom Starting them from just a seed back when there was still snow.. white As they began maturing, I could tell each one on sight Just large enough to be transplanted that spring day The blooms were visible in thought only, in May The angel came in early morn to take me by the hand I bid him let me stay because my life was just sand Now I have a new responsibility here Down where the flowers bloom and to me are so dear Life is not just about the house, washing the dishes clean It's about love, our fellowman; only a few I've seen Thank you death angel for letting me stay that day I'll give this life that I've got left the best day's pay

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/28/2010 10:25:00 AM
you love the bright yellow sun, and the season of spring don't you Sara.(: a second chance is really more than we know, not everyone has that chance, and then that possibility of change is only imagined.great poem -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 3/4/2010 10:38:00 AM
a wonderful poem, its amazing how God gives us second chances and even third ones and so much more, a great testomony too, thanks for your kind comments God bless you from diane
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Date: 2/25/2010 8:06:00 AM
Bravo again my friend. I can relate to this one... I've met Chance also. xo
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Date: 2/23/2010 5:03:00 PM
I really enjoyed this one. A second chance brings inspiration and determination. Good write. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes always. ;)
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Date: 2/21/2010 8:03:00 AM
Lovely piece Sara, we all want to stay that little bit longer >> James
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Date: 2/21/2010 5:12:00 AM
This one needs to be read aloud. In the fourth couplet sand refers that my life was sandy not held together with enough binding so that if I had taken the death angel by the hand I would have filtered through. God granted me time. Sara
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Date: 2/20/2010 3:16:00 PM
Seems like a good way to keep the death angel away. Can't leave until the seeds have sprouted and bloomed , etc. Thanks for reading and commenting. Love, Joyce
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