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Secluded Under the Lowlights

Crowds, laughter, passer, loner Lost in a shade, abandoned in howler The cage of intensity Bribing all the tendencies Talk to the wind blows The dimension of silent shows Glimmers are everywhere But the existence stands to nowhere Today is like the other day Sleep upon a time and disclosed by the other way Dream leads you to the dreams Drugging you to the other schemes If only it's not a dim Like the empty frames hanging on a tree The space depicted to be free Taking the brush and painting the world Heeding the verses and ready to twirl

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Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 11/27/2013 2:51:00 AM

You have lovely lines here, your opening line, and "Sleep upon a time..." for example. Well done.

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 11/28/2013 5:47:00 PM

Thank you Scott pleasure to have your visit :D hug, Yanny

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/5/2013 6:37:00 AM

Tell me more about what you are experiencing here. I feel like somehow your story or thoughts have not completed. Still I am treated with two poems, this brightens my day. Hugs Rick

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/5/2013 5:31:00 PM

I look forward to reading what you come up with.

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 9/5/2013 8:54:00 AM

You are awesome, I also felt like this one is not completed too, but somehow the feelings is just stopped and clicked, I think I need more time for warming up, lol thanks for the add, I will fixed this soon and let you know :) have a lovely day hug yanny

Karen Anglesey

Date: 9/5/2013 6:32:00 AM

Very interesting and mystical. I got the feeling of wanting to be somewhere else, which is something I feel quite often :)

Yanny Widjanarko
Date: 9/5/2013 8:59:00 AM

Thanks Karen, interesting perspective of yours :) for me this poem is like saying "too much for nothing" glad to see you in here today Karen have a lovely day there :) hug, yanny