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dealing with humans
oft leaves me feeling as though
they are dried seaweeds

cold of bright spirit
clammy with the residue
of having brushed life

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  1. Date: 1/27/2014 7:37:00 PM
    this was an interesting one to view. your FIRST post. The second one reads more like a true senryu.. Quite the comparison with the human spirit!

  1. Date: 1/26/2014 7:28:00 AM
    Amelie a big welcome and this one is stunning, a great start...David

  1. Date: 11/16/2013 6:17:00 PM
    Great work. Those last two lines are inspiring. Oh and thanks for the Senryu lesson.

  1. Date: 11/16/2013 12:56:00 PM
    I like both of the senryu's, but I love the second one. That is poetry at its very best. "having brushed life" . . . Yes!

  1. Date: 7/11/2013 3:35:00 PM
    stopping by this one again... i like the way you sway seaweeds, and compare its movement... xox...Linda

  1. Date: 12/21/2012 10:20:00 PM
    Amelie, stopping by with my warmest thoughts~ my best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD

  1. Date: 4/10/2012 5:16:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Amelie. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/9/2012 11:13:00 PM
    Very nice senryu duo. I expect to read more poems from you. Welcome.