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Seasons of the Dance

Atoms dance, stars dance; entropy increases while creation dances. Words and thoughts can dance. These words danced across the page. Seasons of the dance. The seasons dance by; Spring, Summer, Fall and Winter and once again, Spring We too are dancing; some with joy and some with tears, for life is a dance. Those who dance with tears feel the seasons of their life are always Winter. Those who dance with joy celebrate all life's seasons and all life's dances.

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Date: 9/15/2010 8:57:00 PM
Congrats Dory on your HM in Paula's Dance contest... Paula still cannot finalize her contest but has posted a blog with the poem titles and am looking them up to see who the poet is to wish them congrats luv.. enjoy your honor tonight...
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Date: 9/8/2010 7:02:00 PM
Zowie, I hit on a really good one with this one. GREAT series of poems!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/7/2010 6:48:00 AM
If every change is a dance then let us all dance ... I love this metaphor for indeed your poem dances
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Date: 9/7/2010 5:07:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Dory. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/5/2010 6:45:00 PM
A nice multiple Senryu on seasons of dance with nice images, Dory
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Date: 9/5/2010 2:01:00 PM
Nice view of the seasons. You have me smiling with this one. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 9/5/2010 12:14:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup... may your stay here be a long one ... as u entertain with your creative writes... Soup offers many contests.. check them out and enter.. there is one now called DANCE .. u should enter this piece and good luck..with luv..
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Date: 9/5/2010 9:42:00 AM
I enjoyed that.
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Date: 9/5/2010 8:51:00 AM
that was lovely , if it is for the contest it should do extremely well
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Date: 9/5/2010 8:49:00 AM
Very creative and intewresting entry for the Dance contets. Good luck, Dory
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