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Seasons Gone

(spring, summer and autumn) from under the earth's hard crust sprung a host of daffodils~ golden tint thrills eyes ( 7, 7, 5) ladybird in polka frock hid under the leaf~ shaded from summer's hot beams (7, 5, 7) dry leaves flew about hastening to their cold grave~ some moan under crushing boots (5, 7, 7) Dec.8.2022 ~ Placed First~ Triple New Charlieku Poetry Contest Sponsor- Charles Messina

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Date: 1/5/2023 10:28:00 AM
Back with my congrats. I really liked your metaphors.
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Date: 1/5/2023 6:44:00 AM
So well done, Valsa. Simply beautiful. Your win is well-deserved. Congratulations
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Date: 1/5/2023 2:38:00 AM
Beautifully scenic. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/4/2023 8:50:00 PM
So well done, Valsa. Just lovely. Congratulations on your win! Happy New Year! Charlie
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Date: 1/5/2023 5:53:00 AM
Thanks a lot Charles for the wonderful opportunity given and the high placement given to my poem. Wish you blessed New Year of peace and joy !
Date: 12/15/2022 12:29:00 PM
Love how you did your set, Valsa!!
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Date: 12/12/2022 3:16:00 AM
Creative entry in the contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 12/10/2022 6:38:00 AM
My kind of Haiku. Breathtakingly beautiful!
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Date: 12/9/2022 2:14:00 AM
Delightful haikus, dear Valsa.
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Date: 12/8/2022 8:15:00 PM
Love this, Valsa.
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Date: 12/8/2022 5:52:00 AM
Wonderful images of seasons, Valsa. Best to you.
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Date: 12/8/2022 5:26:00 AM
Wow! Very descriptive, in the moment capture and feel. Excellent poetry! Quite a gift to be able to relate to others so enchantingly, the wonder of your senses. Blessings my friend!
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Date: 12/8/2022 3:08:00 AM
Well composed Valsa, you captured the seasons well in this string of haiku. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 12/8/2022 2:55:00 AM
- That season is gone ... a beautiful time you have described, Valsa - Today the earth was covered with snow - Best wishes in the contest :) -
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Date: 12/8/2022 1:54:00 AM
Wonderful. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina
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