Seasons

A summer so hot, The wind is always unfound, The grass shrivals up.

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/4/2009 7:18:00 PM

Congratulations for your honorable mention in Abe's Haiku Season's contest. Love, Dane

Shirin Neshat

Date: 5/1/2009 4:35:00 PM

it made me smile, keep it up.

Brandee Augustus

Date: 5/1/2009 2:09:00 PM

I completely agree with every word that's in your haiku. It's the very essence of summer in most places in this world. Congratulations on your well deserved placement in the Haiku Seasons contest.

Date: 5/1/2009 12:20:00 PM

Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on being one of the winners in the haiku contest to my other comment. Enjoy your honor! Karen

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/1/2009 12:09:00 AM

Congrats with your HM in the contest...Nice job...Raul

Lena Townsend

Date: 4/30/2009 11:42:00 PM

Well done. Congratulations on the Honorable Mention. Nice writing. Smiles from Lolita

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/22/2009 11:28:00 AM

Sounds like the beginning of a drought, nice work and great use of imagery...Raul

Date: 4/22/2009 8:50:00 AM

So much truth here. That's why I prefer spring. Keep on writing! Best wishes. Karen