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Seasonal Alouette

Autumn enters now, cleansing every bough. Leaves start tumbling to the ground, caught in spiral whorl, patterned in a swirl. Still falling without a sound. Above, limbs are bare. Coldest air they'll share. They'll stay that way until spring. Fighting with the cold, waiting to behold. When the birds begin to sing. 8/31/14

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Date: 9/15/2014 4:02:00 PM
Hey, this was a very nice autumn Alouette, my friend. Congrats for your win in my contest.
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Date: 9/15/2014 2:16:00 PM
Absolutely stunning Frederic. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/15/2014 8:09:00 AM
I agree with Connie..a big congrats. BG
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Date: 9/15/2014 7:29:00 AM
This one captured my love for autumn Frederic, and would have be higher up for me. Congrats on your win with this beauty!
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Date: 8/31/2014 3:08:00 PM
wonderful imagery Frederic. good luck in the contest. Hugs jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/31/2014 3:17:00 PM
top left hand side of page under 'member area' and 'my outboxes' just go in and edit a comment or delete it - I tend to do this when i post a comment for one person and it pops up on another comment above it - but make sure you copy the comment so you can post it for the right person:-) Hugs jan xx
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/31/2014 3:14:00 PM
thank you Jan, by the way how do you remove a comment

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