Seaside Reflection

The dance of the waves Ardent embrace of the sun Eternal moment.

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/5/2015 12:32:00 PM

Your first haiku I am reading. Grand. Love>>rajat

Eileen Manassian
Date: 1/5/2015 12:35:00 PM

HI Rajat...I'm glad you liked it. There is a lot of talk on what constitutes a GOOD haiku...so I don't write many of them. So glad you liked this one. Thanks for all your visits, my dear. Much appreciated. Hugs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/29/2012 9:09:00 PM

Eileen, love the haiku... and the forever light,, good haiku moment to expose... pd

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/30/2012 5:15:00 AM

Dear Pd...I was wondering if the ending line should read..........sizzling summer! ;) What do you think? Thanks for the post. Have a great day!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/28/2012 11:43:00 PM

I have some friends who would disagree that this was a haiku, but I write them this way myself very often and I LOVE this style. nice seeing some of your haiku tonight!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/29/2012 1:17:00 AM

Thanks every so much, Andrea. I appreciate any insights you have on the matter. I have written another one called "Warmth". Would you mind having a read?

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/25/2012 1:42:00 PM

You write so well my poet friend.. love this piece.. strong images in a few short words... Michael

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/25/2012 3:32:00 PM

Thanks ever so much, Michael. :) You've brought me joy. Have a wonderful day!

Jack Ellison

Date: 11/25/2012 9:39:00 AM

You describe a paradise! You are a very lucky lady! Love and hugs, Jack

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/25/2012 10:58:00 AM

Thanks ever so much, Jack. I love the sea. I get lost in time. :) Hope all is well with you. Thanks for your lovely post.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/25/2012 5:03:00 AM

Ahhh!!I can just see the scene..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara

Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/25/2012 7:28:00 AM

Thanks, Sara. Glad you enjoyed it. I love the sea, sun, and summer! :) Having lived on the island of Cyprus for 17 years can do that to you! Have a lovely day! God bless!