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© Elizabeth Bishop

Shoes in hand, skirting dunes, protruding rocks, I slowly make it to the water’s edge where sand and pebbles slide and gently rock to the touch of swirling, playful waves. A lone sandpiper skips; it pecks and probes then with head raised it gives a joyful trill blissfully unaware of alien presence. Clouds hang heavily from a forlorn sky. The sea is grey; the breeze in teasing mood whispers to me, nudging distant memories shelved in the dormant corners of my mind. In this same spot, where subconsciously I find myself as autumn nears its end, we said our last goodbye...I wiped her tears before reluctantly she walked away from my life and our forbidden love. --------------------------- 2nd February, 2016 Contest: The Sea Shore Sponsor: Craig Cornish

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Date: 11/3/2020 11:53:00 AM
what a powerful & moving write here, my friend
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Date: 11/5/2020 5:59:00 AM
Thank you, Jack. Have a nice day, my friend. // paul
Date: 5/29/2016 6:31:00 PM
an awesome poem - images project themselves like 3-D cinemagraphing
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Date: 5/31/2016 3:55:00 AM
That's a lovely awesome comment, Richard! Thank you! ~ Pleased to be making your acquaintance. ~ Regards // paul
Date: 2/16/2016 3:43:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem very much xoxoxo
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Date: 2/16/2016 4:42:00 PM
Thank you very much, Aurore! So pleased to have you stopping by:) Warm regards // paul
Date: 2/14/2016 8:44:00 AM
I think your write is lovely, a pleasure to read. You took me there with skill and I felt his bittersweet, melancholy, state of mind ... CayCay
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Date: 2/14/2016 12:01:00 PM
You make a very good critic, CayCay:) I love your remarks and the right choice of words that you use; thank you. ~ Regards // paul
Date: 2/11/2016 10:11:00 PM
Paul, Congrats on your "Sea Shore win." LINDA
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Date: 2/12/2016 5:40:00 PM
Thank you, Linda...I must have this one yesterday! Sweet regards // paul
Date: 2/11/2016 4:23:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Paul!!
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Date: 2/11/2016 6:37:00 AM
Thank you for the congrats, Upma:) ~ All the best. // paul
Date: 2/10/2016 11:22:00 PM
A wonderful write, Paul, from setting the scene in the now, to then, and why. And you leave us with unanswered questions, dammit :) . Well done. Regards, Viv
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Date: 2/11/2016 5:46:00 AM
Glad that you enjoyed it, Viv; I will leave the unanswered questions to your imagination, but don't let it run too far:) Thank you. ~ Regards // paul
Date: 2/10/2016 8:32:00 PM
Awesome Paul. I was taken in from the start, felt your ending as if there. Took me back. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 2/11/2016 5:51:00 AM
Your awesome comments are much appreciated, Susan; thank you for a lovely visit. ~ All the best // paul
Date: 2/10/2016 4:59:00 PM
Paul, I love this verse..."Shoes in hand, skirting dunes, protruding rocks, I slowly make it to the water’s edge where sand and pebbles slide and gently rock to the touch of swirling, playful waves." Such lovely imagery :) Congrats on your placement :)-*Smiles* -luloo
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Paul Callus
Date: 2/10/2016 6:04:00 PM
Thank you Laura:) As always, your feedback is much appreciated; so pleased that you like it, and also to have you visiting:) Lovely avatar, by the way! ~ Warm regards // paul
Date: 2/10/2016 4:47:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Paul, with a sad, unexpected ending. Congratulations on your HM win. Sandra
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Date: 2/10/2016 6:17:00 PM
Glad you like the imagery and the sad ending, Sandra. Imagery happens to be the main focus point of most of these entries. Thank you for your support. Regards // paul
Date: 2/7/2016 7:43:00 PM
I'm watching the game, it's half time.... Stopping by to say hi... Linda
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Date: 2/8/2016 3:24:00 PM
I love most types of sports Linda, but I know little about American football....:( I did write some footles about it, though. I have just come back from playing badminton...:) hugs // paul
Date: 2/6/2016 9:19:00 PM
In that Case, I NEED! I NEED! lol..LINDA
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Date: 2/10/2016 8:13:00 PM
It does not work like that
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Paul Callus
Date: 2/7/2016 1:19:00 PM
Oh darn...no flights available today! What about employing a secretary:) ~ paul
Date: 2/4/2016 6:49:00 PM
Great imagery and excellent pivot, Paul. One feels the pain... poetry. 7. hugs!
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Date: 2/5/2016 8:24:00 AM
Thank you for the lovely complimentary feedback and the high rating, Kim:) Hope you are keeping well! Hugs // paul
Date: 2/4/2016 10:35:00 AM
Great Imagery, sad ending, good write
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Date: 2/4/2016 12:42:00 PM
Encouraging staccato comments:) ...thank you Amar...pleased to make your acquaintance. // paul
Date: 2/3/2016 7:03:00 PM
enjoyed your entry Paul, good luck in the contest:)
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Paul Callus
Date: 2/4/2016 10:00:00 AM
Thank you, Linda. If you need finger massage let me know:) hugs // paul
Date: 2/3/2016 5:51:00 PM
you set the scene nicely for this one, the ending so bittersweet...one could feel the moment through your words :)
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Date: 2/4/2016 10:02:00 AM
Thank you for the lovely feedback, Sandra:) I feel that both our entries have something in common! ~ Regards // paul
Date: 2/3/2016 1:44:00 PM
Good structure with a natural cadence that welcomes the reader and enlist further exploration. Well written. Emile. #7
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Date: 2/3/2016 1:49:00 PM
Welcome feedback, Emile! Thank you for commenting and for the high rating. Regards // paul
Date: 2/3/2016 12:54:00 AM
Memories, a favorite subject for me as of late. Exceptional well done my friend. Ending verses , O' how that faded memory haunts me but it was at a campsite in a beautiful forest and it was Spring not Autumn that I once saw such a replay my friend. A7
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Date: 2/3/2016 1:41:00 PM
Hi Robert! Pleased to have you visiting; I have not been much on the site lately...have got too much on my hands! Glad you found this to your liking, and thank you for the high rating, my friend. Take care....paul
Date: 2/2/2016 8:38:00 PM
Wow Paul...this gave me chills. I loved it! I hope to see it as a top winner in the contest. It would be right up there for me. Cheers, Connie #7
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Paul Callus
Date: 2/3/2016 1:01:00 PM
Your comments are very encouraging, Connie; thank you for the faith you show in it:) ~ Warm regards // paul
Date: 2/2/2016 6:12:00 PM
oh beautiful but a sad memory Paul such wonderful imagery - really enjoyed:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Paul Callus
Date: 2/3/2016 10:32:00 AM
Thank you, Jan..I love your comments:) I don't exactly know what Craig wants, but I followed my muse! Hugs // paul

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