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Seashell

Seashell as I take shape i lie here in wait the wind beating upon my back my image carved out by gritty sands of life i feel my grooves; their hardness i get smoothed over by the warm sun but jagged edges still remain not as pristine as when I began i am swept up by the gentle palm of tide the water-it absolves me rightly cleansed i face sand and wind again picked up and thrown down never the right fit battered by the elements of time as I take shape lifted up from this place of toil at last held to my saviours’ ear i sing a song of redemption for my glorious god to hear -8/3/14-

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Date: 8/17/2014 11:07:00 AM
Christine, this is a really beautiful poem. I tracked you down to tell you that since it was over the line limit of my contest. Very fine work and I love its message. Thanks for writing this poem! soupmail
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Christine Costello
Date: 8/17/2014 12:41:00 PM
Andrea- Thanks so much for you kind words-I couldn't stop myself. :-)Christine

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