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Seascapes

Seascapes Amber kissed ocean Beneath sun’s fiery burn Wave upon sienna shores.

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Joanna Smith

Date: 2/17/2010 12:59:00 PM

this is a great haiku way better than mine (no wonder i didnt even place was my first haiku) the second line was very beautiful and i loved it! good write=)jo

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/15/2010 11:40:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Jeralynn. I enjoyed reading it. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/14/2010 7:01:00 PM

Hey cool Haiku, Jeralynn! Very good. Gotta try one now. God bless--Robert

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/14/2010 4:46:00 PM

Wonderful Haiku, Jeralyn! I wish you good luck in Raul's contest! Great job! Peace, love, Audrey

Kim Hilliker

Date: 2/14/2010 3:34:00 PM

Well written Haiku for Raul's contest. Best of luck to you.

Colleen Bono

Date: 2/14/2010 1:59:00 PM

nicely said.you have soup mail.

Marty Owens

Date: 2/14/2010 1:55:00 PM

This is a beautiful Haiku...I've read a lot of them and there are so many wonderful interpretations...I would hate to have to judge this contest...lol....Marty