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Searching Heaven

through the eye of an needle in sandstorms of life I glimpse you in heaven rich in loves thread I begin to weave love spun silver in the deepest depths I found you the light becomes your stage my crusade to love surrounded in lights armor my crystalised heart in the flicker of a thousand candles each flicker my soul flies a kaelidescope of lights colour fluttering my souls eye my diamond treasure touching a night's sky as the moon it smiles upon you stars like diamonds they surround you confetti in the air one star twinkles in the eye a shooting across the night sky wishing upon you sprinkle heaven as the sun smiles radiant warmth upon my pillow an oasis of love my beautiful mirage only in dreams I found you

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Date: 10/10/2013 12:35:00 AM
This one captured me the most as I read through most of your work. I could feel the brightness and open space as your choice imagery transported me there. Your ending compelled me to sigh, disappointed it was only a dream. Amazing read, thanks for sharing Liam
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Date: 9/29/2013 6:23:00 PM
Your poem is rich with beauty. I'm running out of words to say Liam so when you hear the first quack just nod your head...lol.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/29/2013 6:59:00 PM
quack has a bone to with you ha ha thank you dearly my friend deeply appreciated

Book: Shattered Sighs