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As I made my way through the shadowy forest of doubt, I had the most unusual dreamlike thoughts. I stared trancelike when a herd of unicorns approached, led by a surreal Mad Hatter seeking Alice. In the hazy early morning light on a trail we’d traveled often, I paused to blink, knowing the visions were ethereal. Unicorns? Please, this herd looked like something from a fairytale, and I wondered if they could be anything but imaginary. Then a familiar voice I heard. It was yours, my love. You reminded me to enjoy the moment, not to think so hard. Real or unreal, it was a vision brewed by an active imagination, one that will not rest until I find my way back to you. *May 24, 2021 For Constance La France’s “Dreamlike” Contest

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Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 4/13/2024 7:44:00 AM

Missing you is like missing a true friend and a great poet, who used to write with boldness and beauty of its own. We had long associations on PS since 2010 perhaps dear Carolyn. We have lost you now forever, but your poetry would for ever and ever with same warmth and love as you wrote them. May your soul dear friend rest in eternal peace for ever...... Ravindra K Kapoor

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 4/13/2024 7:42:00 AM

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/5/2023 8:38:00 AM

On the 3rd of August 2021 you flew up high to the land of no tears..Always close to heart Dear Carolyn xx

John Loving Iii

Date: 6/24/2023 2:08:00 PM

I still miss what we had here. We were very attached so much so that I still feel the loss of you. We never met here on Earth but I'm sure in heaven You'll come up to me and say your name and I'll go crazy. So I use this moment to tell the soupers that read this. I love you Carolyn.

Constance La France

Date: 9/24/2022 8:38:00 AM

Carolyn, I was thinking about you today. I miss you very much. I guess God needed another angel, but why did he have to take you? You took a piece of my heart with you when you died and thanks for leaving us your poetry to treasure. I am so happy that your last poem written was for my contest, rest in peace, dear friend, Constance

John Loving Iii

Date: 7/14/2022 6:27:00 PM

Yes, you can say I'm searching for you.

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/28/2022 4:43:00 PM

Poets speaking as if your gone. Well I'll see you there later. Loved you for all it's worth. You were faithful.

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/28/2022 4:38:00 PM

This is sooooo addressed to me. Checking in and finding you. Glad your still here. I'm just beginning to come back. Have new subjects to write about if I can live that long. learning to live with ageing heart conditions so and so. be back soon.

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/19/2022 2:18:00 PM

So imaginative, and rich in imagery an Outstanding piece to enjoy '

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/23/2021 3:03:00 PM

Searching for you this Christmas Dear Friend.Happy Christmas in Heaven.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 12/15/2021 5:05:00 PM

Thinking of you at Xmas, love, Jim

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/23/2021 9:08:00 AM

I'm sure you found your way back to the one and joined him in eternal peace Dear Carolyn.How I regret that we didn't manage to meet face to face in this world my good friend.Hopefully I see you in the Better one.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 10/21/2021 9:59:00 AM

Aww nooh you will be missed, will miss your lovely poems and positive comments soo much. So sad to hear , RIP dear friend.

Robert James Liguori

Date: 10/7/2021 1:59:00 PM

Rest in Peace.

Jack Horne

Date: 9/28/2021 7:08:00 AM

Just dropping by to send you my love. I miss you, hon xxx

Elaine George

Date: 9/1/2021 1:27:00 PM

Dear Carolyn, My friend, my mentor...you will remain in my heart forever. Love you so dearly.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/1/2021 12:28:00 PM

Miss you

Michelle Smith

Date: 8/17/2021 10:52:00 AM

I've never not believed in unicorns, ever since I was a kid :)

David Byrne

Date: 8/10/2021 10:26:00 PM

I was so sad to learn of your demise Carolyn. I write this as if you can read it, your comments on my work over the years were so heartwarming and encouraging. I am saddened by your departure but also gladdened to have been privileged to have known and interacted with you. You made this world a more wonderful place to be while you were here in it. RIP dear Carolyn :)

Manon Boudreau Star Child Nebula

Date: 8/9/2021 6:59:00 AM

Rip my dear writer and community friend. May your words echoe in our heart to appreciate all the beauty that surrounds. Look down and smile to see how dearly missed you are amongst us all at PoetrySoup.

Jayme Chapin

Date: 8/8/2021 9:16:00 PM

Rest in peace. May God always bless you up above; as you journey through the high land set out for you. May the unicorns walk gracefully with you upon your heavenly journey.

Funom Makama

Date: 8/8/2021 6:58:00 PM

Rest in peace Carolyn.

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 8/8/2021 2:06:00 PM

Dear Carolyn, I am just now enjoying your tremendous talent and rich poetic legacy. Just like your recent acrostic poem Sunflowers, you have "left a lasting impression". May you rest in peace and know that you were well loved and appreciated. Thank you, Nancy Kaufman

Franci Hoffman

Date: 8/8/2021 10:31:00 AM

Rest in Peace dear Carolyn. May your lovely poetry be eternal.

Robertina B.

Date: 8/8/2021 9:11:00 AM

Rest in Peace to a Beautiful Poetess.. Your stellar poetry will live on .. As you will live in the Eternal Life..