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Sealed In Unhappiness

Once long ago You made the sun shine Now you cast A septic sulphuric shadow You came and stole My heart and my happiness And interred them In cold grey granite stone Days once so brief Now linger, last too long As we must sit Separate in the same room And listen to The silence of hurtful hate For contest * Jaded Love* by John Heck

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/20/2010 7:55:00 PM
This is great writing, eamon. A very apt description of jaded love indeed! Did it not win in the contest?? GEEEZ!!
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Date: 12/14/2010 6:21:00 PM
Powerful!
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Date: 12/6/2010 12:39:00 AM
well written
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Date: 12/5/2010 3:14:00 PM
An excellent and expressive entry Eamon.. best of luck to u my friend.. an awesome write for John to enjoy ... good luck with luv..
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Date: 12/5/2010 1:36:00 PM
Short but quite meaningful write on the jaded partitions, Eamon
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Date: 12/5/2010 1:34:00 PM
deep write,, a good entry for the contest,, good luck,..p.d.
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