Seagull

arching over rainbows singing the present thought since newborn, beats the sheltered heart freedom

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Robin Davis

Date: 10/9/2013 7:25:00 PM

This is a creative and imaginative write Full of imagery and life that pulls the reader in. nice job

Frances King

Date: 7/12/2009 3:26:00 PM

This is a beautiful cinquain, James! Thank you for your comments on Cool Man. Im learning so much about structure from you and our fellow Soupers - before, it was very much "seat of the pants"!

Nola Perez

Date: 7/11/2009 8:15:00 AM

Reading you, as we speak, beginning with seagull poem Did I post my Ruminations in the Parking Lot? You would like it, I think. I live near the ocean on the barrier island where I was born. Lots of gulls. I love these beautiful birds. Thanks for comment on my new poem. It is title poem of new poetry collection I am working on. Nola

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/10/2009 5:43:00 PM

Your poem takes flight! Yours Matthew Anish

Heidie Buys

Date: 7/10/2009 6:48:00 AM

Once again love the format, gorgeous images and stunning conclusion. Well done. Regards Heidie

Brian Strand

Date: 7/9/2009 11:35:00 PM

Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Jim.Rgds Brian.Congrats on your cinquain it is a beautiful form

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/9/2009 9:24:00 PM

beautiful imagery,beautiful seagull arching over rainbows--singing freedom--the best word ever--this goes to my favs-i love it jim--charma

Christopher Higgins

Date: 7/9/2009 8:15:00 PM

You are the man Jim..your intelligence always shine through in your awesome poetry..pleasure to read your work.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/9/2009 7:40:00 PM

Seagulls in flight do represent freedom and I like the way you describe them "arching over rainbows." Beautiful cinquain, James! Love, Carolyn