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Seaglass

lined the rubble stained and smiling i staggered in the low dark tide clawing the rocks hunting for morning

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/8/2009 5:18:00 AM
loved this! It's simplicity totally fits the subject. A ruff cut diamond, a diamond in the raw! Thank for the info on my comment of your verse. I'm very weak on forms and am only beginning to explore them not yet up to letting go of them and dabbling with words as if they were paint, which of course they are! Light & Love Debbie Guzzi
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