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Sea Echo's My Name

Transparent of darkness of the sea touched only briefly state of lonely madness in disfigured shadows bowed moonlight mastering feats of fathom light that is calling so swiftly..... I plant feet deep unto the bright that are traveled in sweeping waves more reluctant butterfly of the fathom of light I have begged to fly into the bittersweet swells misty future to forsake floating unseen creatures in the stormy seas ... I preferred to stare to the future and bury my eyes from the nonchalance of living things and lies that face others on this living night.... Thoughts that never left a simply poet like me calling mysteries to explore holding on to answers with all my heart in the fathom light of the sea that echo's my name... Brooke

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Date: 6/21/2014 6:16:00 AM
brimming with rhythmic swells... nicely done
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Date: 5/25/2014 3:54:00 PM
beautiful and priceless poem.....you have reached poetic stardom Brooke. Best regards......Phillip/
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Date: 5/25/2014 8:27:00 AM
Who knew that an echoing flowing Brooke would lead us to the Sea. I enjoyed this piece.
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Date: 5/24/2014 5:50:00 AM
Great images here, especially of the 'reluctant butterfly'. Love it!
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/25/2014 10:35:00 PM
HEY GIRLFRIEND.. hope you are having a great memorial weekend..
Date: 5/24/2014 12:27:00 AM
A great write my friend. I expected no less .
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/25/2014 10:22:00 PM
Thank you so much Robert
Date: 5/23/2014 10:08:00 AM
Hi Brooke, I wanted to stop by and say hello and to read this write. Brooke this is simply the most elegant Poem!! It speaks volumes that are full of expression. As a fan of yours you have delighted us as always. Great write my friend. Thanks for sharing this with us here. Love and Peace, Deborah
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Brooke Dylan
Date: 5/23/2014 12:36:00 PM
THANK YOU Deborah I will come see you ..

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