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Sea Cave

A sea cave hides beneath the sandstone cliffs where livid waters pound its rocky walls and eerie squawks of gulls resound in waves as stinging sea salt droplets spray my eyes. For I have crawled into this domed enclave to feel the pulse of nature's untamed world and smell the wildness of these pungent scents as bracing waves splash quickly round my feet. For here is where my soul embraces God to listen to His voice resound in tides it cleanses weary thoughts trapped in my mind I'm baptized once again into His love. Written on 11/16/2016

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Date: 6/17/2017 9:43:00 PM
I love your desription of the cave - beautiful poem. Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 6/17/2017 5:06:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Laura! Congrats on your win. Thanks for entering my contest. Janice
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/17/2017 8:06:00 PM
Thanks so very much for my placement in your contest, Janice! I'm so glad you liked my poem :)
Date: 12/10/2016 10:48:00 PM
Lovely poem expressing so well a respect and love for nature. Congrats on your win, Laura! Janice
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Date: 12/10/2016 9:46:00 PM
Congrats Laura!! I like this!! Big Hugggs. Deb
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Date: 12/10/2016 6:11:00 PM
Congrats on your placement, Laura.
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Date: 12/10/2016 2:48:00 PM
Laura, a fine, natural ride into your beauty.
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Date: 11/20/2016 10:53:00 AM
Just got better and better, I took me into that cave, and then to heaven x
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/20/2016 1:54:00 PM
Thanks, Wendy! So glad you enjoyed my poem :)
Date: 11/16/2016 3:27:00 PM
Good going Laura, glad to be an inspiration - Elaine George writes lots of sea poetry check hers out too! Light & Love
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/17/2016 10:01:00 AM
Thank you, Debbie :)
Date: 11/16/2016 12:35:00 PM
This poem is s beautiful Laura. 7 ; )
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/16/2016 12:40:00 PM
Thanks, Connie! I haven't written in awhile... no inspiration, but it's slowly coming back ;)

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