Get Your Premium Membership

Sea Angels

Sea Angels I walk the ocean sands and wade among the waves. I see an angel in motion dancing on the foam. This angel swirls and dips the tutu fans with lunge; Ballerinas in mid air Or wings of glossy jell. Fragile form yet vile Like love you've had awhile. Beautiful, yet stings Jellyfish at the beach.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/19/2010 8:11:00 AM
Congratulations Jeralynn on your well deserved win in Susan Mill's contest "Jellyfish at the Beach". Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 7/18/2010 8:09:00 AM
Many congratulations Jeralyn on your win in Susan's fine contest >> James
Login to Reply
Date: 7/13/2010 4:56:00 PM
Awesome imagery and creative use of language, Jeralynn. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 7/13/2010 3:30:00 PM
Congrats Jeralynn on your winning poem in the Jellyfish contest with this awesome write .. never thought of them as sea angels but u gave new meaning to them with this poem.. enjoy your fantastic win.. with luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 7/8/2010 8:16:00 PM
Yes they are quite beautiful when they are moving throught the water-Horrible stings though! Good Luck!~Tirzah~
Login to Reply
Date: 7/8/2010 7:58:00 PM
I never thought about jellyfish this way... but you are right on.... Very good poem!!!!!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/8/2010 6:02:00 PM
Excellent description of this spineless creature that stings so well. Nice read.
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs