Sea

SEA sapphire translucent untold deep longings gently swept by the ebb into the cliffs where love hushed "in thy deep bosom wounds shall heal " 18 September 2020 Pyramids Contest Judged: 9/20/2020 6:05:00 AM Sponsored by: Joseph May 1st place

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Line Gauthier

Date: 7/21/2021 3:58:00 AM

well crafted ~ love the soothing message

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 11/22/2020 6:15:00 AM

Love this my friend,. God bless you always

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 10/15/2020 8:25:00 AM

The many moods of the sea. Feeling shared emotions. This verse from deep within. Congratulations JCB on your win.

John Castellenas

Date: 10/12/2020 1:33:00 AM

Amazing use of words. You made the reader feel and understand every word. Thank you for sharing your poetry.

Angela Crabtree

Date: 10/2/2020 6:39:00 PM

Beautiful description of the sea adding romance to the theme. I also liked the healing aspect of it. Congratulations on your win! Peace, Angie

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 9/29/2020 7:10:00 PM

Congratulations, Dear Friend. This is so touching! What a mysterious imagery!

Carol Mitra

Date: 9/20/2020 11:18:00 PM

A Healing Sea...We so need this during these trying times....Congrats on your win JCB.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2020 1:40:00 PM

I just KNEW this would be a big winner. Congratulations.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/20/2020 12:37:00 PM

- JCB ... beautiful written :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 9/20/2020 11:45:00 AM

Beautiful write JCB, Congrats on your win

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/20/2020 10:54:00 AM

this is a fav for me JC, what a lovely way to think of the sea. Many congratulations on your 1st place. Jeanne :D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/19/2020 10:27:00 AM

FANTASTIC!!! So poetic.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/18/2020 3:12:00 PM

a sense of mystery makes this poem arresting...well done, JC...huggs