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Sculpting Anne Sexton

Your tongue forced like clothes pins wetting cinnamon lips, gnawing at the barrier of one another. Sketching, Sketching, Hands shaping you, catching you drawn paper filed with the note no one left, a skilled architect, slowly tracing across your torso. Dog- earring the pages of your book, inner knowledge; pages written with pearl droplets of silk incandescent from moon colored sweat. Fusing pressed ribs together firm as tuning forks, asthmatic breath paining the wind rushing through your chest; sobbing in, sobbing out. Sheets twisting each other in quicksand your brail fingers finding my spine racing down my back like a fire pole. A sculptor arching your neck, pausing amethyst eyes impatient like pedestrian traffic hurried to find nowhere Stamping, Stamping. My hand planted in the small of your back a careful caretaker stripped to the bone, keeping us pinned together carelessly inside out, upside down

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/2/2010 1:49:00 PM
She was such a talent and such a tragedy. Powerful portrayal. Thank you for sharing. Lainie
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Date: 12/31/2009 12:49:00 PM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A well deserved honor.
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Date: 12/28/2009 3:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine poem being featured this week, Happy New Year >> James
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Date: 3/11/2009 4:43:00 PM
This poem had me rushing through each word to get to the next - i love it. like Denis said, a real sense of urgency is given to the reader here. an amazing, amazing poem, you are quite a talent. love, Kristin
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Date: 3/6/2009 9:28:00 AM
As I wrote this those thoughts plundered my thoughts as well. She had so much passion that I do not think this poem gives it justice. However she is amazing. Thank you for your comments, they are generous. -Jason
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Date: 2/21/2009 6:00:00 PM
Jason, you have an amazing gift for language arts! Wonderful images and a creative style make this poem a great read. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/21/2009 5:59:00 PM
Jason, you have an amazing gift for language arts! Wonderful images and a creative style make this poem a great read. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/14/2008 10:50:00 AM
A real sense of urgency in this from the opening stanza on. The narrative seems to demand that it be read in a rush. The repeat word that you use twice helps add to the urgency and creates a brilliant effect.
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Date: 12/13/2008 6:32:00 PM
Excellent poem Jason, clever and great use of imagery...Raul
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Date: 12/13/2008 6:00:00 PM
Raw, visceral language and striking imagery... Anne is smiling. The best of the confessional poets. She and Plath were good friends. Well done Jason! Best wishes, Keith
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