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Scrutiny

Sadness scrambles to survive and tears become termites Self reliant moles taint speechless lips and form explanations yet to ripen Tears that reject wiping smear pride's respiratory system leaving heart beat unpuffed Humility is Reality What makes sense is not always understood... And weeping ensues.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/23/2019 6:16:00 AM
not happy to read this poem, but touched, which is good. I like what you did with tears, tears termites, tears wiping. I might do something with tears and tears, "tairs". Tears "tair" into me. Noel from NoelsArt
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Date: 8/19/2015 4:31:00 PM
This one gave me good cause to think. I like this poem. A7
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