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Was it only for this You endure trash and flies Magi's bow and kiss And parents laden arms With dazzling gifts In sparkling paper wraps Hustling in the bustling Drip and drizzle O a season's festivities? Was only for this The African bowed With his heavy charity of wood He could not even own, Being marginalized and propertyless Property of your love And I pulpit story Again and again Of redemption In a manger sleeping? From the scraps of economy In the blistered wonder land The tax and strain Of tradition's requirement Deepens the pain Foreign to repentance here Ignorant to the cosmic despair The soul brinks on precipice Of the unaware Manger and cross Are just another commodity In the archeology of disbelief.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/15/2009 11:27:00 AM
Totally profound! So many of us view the celebration of Christmas as a means to amass wealth. .." Thanks for sharing this! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 12/15/2009 7:37:00 AM
I really like the last five lines on this one but not sure what you meant. Keep the creative and magical pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 12/15/2009 6:19:00 AM
this is very good stuff. I like the way you write. Solemn and powerful.
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