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I was gonna write a poem To give thanks and praise you Lord, Soon to learn my rhymes were crippled With no power were my words, So I beg you; heal my weakness! Take the darkness From my soul, Asking patience And forgiveness ‘cause you know- I’ll scribble more!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/25/2014 8:29:00 PM
Nice win...PD
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Date: 9/25/2014 7:49:00 AM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write Miroslaw! Great work really !
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Miroslaw Eric Sulkowski
Date: 9/29/2014 3:06:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 9/24/2014 7:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this fine write.
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Miroslaw Eric Sulkowski
Date: 9/29/2014 3:05:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 9/24/2014 4:12:00 PM
A great scribble...congrats
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Miroslaw Eric Sulkowski
Date: 9/25/2014 3:16:00 PM
Thanks Tim. Seems like scribbling pays off... sometimes :)
Date: 9/24/2014 10:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Miroslaw. I love this beautiful poem, especially the last line.
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Miroslaw Eric Sulkowski
Date: 9/29/2014 3:05:00 PM
I wasn't sure how to finish it off at first, and then it came to me. Glad you enjoyed it Brenda
Date: 9/24/2014 5:02:00 AM
a beautiful heartfelt prayer that i can relate too many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Miroslaw Eric Sulkowski
Date: 9/29/2014 3:01:00 PM
Thank you Jan
Date: 9/22/2014 4:19:00 PM
Thank you, Miroslaw, I enjoyed your writing.. A wonderful prayer that I often tell myself not in those same words but almost. love eve
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Miroslaw Eric Sulkowski
Date: 9/23/2014 2:49:00 PM
Thanks Eve. Glad you liked it

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