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Scribble All Over Your Face

Fueled by a schizoid frenzy in an angers intensity and loves acidity Sparked by a passions blazing in an array of crayons and blank faced canvas Ignited by a lovers raging in an unleashing of scribbling and vivid colors releasing Fired by a wild appeasing in an mind blowing flow and caught up in throws Cooled by an abstract messiness in an anger well spent and into the closet This Scribbled Face Went!

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Christy Stover

Date: 11/4/2016 10:07:00 PM

You'd never be able to tell that this was your first attempt. I can visualize each move and feel the intensity of the emotion fueling it making the atmosphere heavy.

Chris Green

Date: 11/4/2016 8:14:00 AM

Art is art is art. I can see this frantic and angry scene playing out, the motions of the hands, arms flailing wildly, the look of defiance in the artists eyes and then the masterpiece that comes, only to be locked away so the true feelings of the emotions are never know. This was great Holly, yes indeed you are an artist, even your poetry comes to us in furious brush strokes.

Holly Bohto
Date: 11/4/2016 8:23:00 AM

Thanks Chris. This was a challenging write. Took two hours. Thanks for the idea. It was really how you described it... The way I painted it.