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Screaming, Lost, and Trapped

Trapped... ensnared by the beautifully intricate lies her mind created and presented as gentle whispers of a god. Lost... the child who looks to her for guidance, love and the man who must stand by in confusion. Screaming... loudly with her actions and yet those who mean the most are impotent and allow her to go on.

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Leo Larry Amadore

Date: 5/22/2011 10:54:00 AM

Scary and graphic depiction of situations too often encountered...nicely turned descriptive phrases.

Renee Kelly
Date: 5/22/2011 10:58:00 AM

Thank you. This is in reference to someone I've had to deal with for nearly three years. She's obviously insane and no one around her seems to see it or has attempted to help. Scary stuff.