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Scratches On the Wall

Four men standing in a row and then one laid across, Just sticks of time and marks upon the wall, A measurement of attitude, of loneliness and pain, But others see it as a lot of scrawl. Sticks of time, a calendar of wasted days and years, Just scratches of a life that's gone to waste, While taking time to tell a tale of life behind these bars, With years ahead there's never any haste. Four men standing in a row and then one laid across, It's now a crowd that stands upon the wall, As five men turn to twenty-five, then eighteen thousand strong, With fifty years of scratching on the wall. Fifty years, an army strong, the witnesses of death, Accusers to be first to cast a stone, Such ridicule and torment is a thing that I accept, For there is not a way I can atone. Four men standing in a row and then one laid across, Just four men and the one who holds them tight, Which binds me in this prison for a life and then a day, And nothing I can do will make it right.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/4/2017 5:09:00 PM
A brilliant and intriguing write! 7 and a fave
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/4/2017 8:52:00 PM
Lol awesome! My first read through it was a literal prison, but I read through the "bars" to subsequently decide it need not be, it was a metaphysical prison, and a fantastically creative one to boot. What ever your intent, a fabulous fiction it is :)
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David Pekrul
Date: 3/4/2017 5:16:00 PM
Thank you Maureen. Please know that this is only a work of fiction. My only brush with the law is two speeding tickets in 49 years of driving!

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