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Scratch In the Summer Sky

Written on August 13, 2012 Cluttering the blue - A thick white line of a cloud. The jet races away. Your Best Haiku contest Fifth Place

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Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 5/31/2013 9:17:00 PM

Terrific haiku, Gail, enjoyed it, nice catch!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/30/2012 6:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Nathan's "Your Best Haiku" contest Gail. Love, Carol

Yanny Widjanarko

Date: 11/22/2012 5:19:00 PM

Hey Gail, congrats of your winning too, your haiku is really great :D - Hug, Yanny

Gail Debole
Date: 11/24/2012 4:41:00 PM

Hi Yanny - Thank you for the acknowledgement! - Gail

Kaye S-

Date: 11/22/2012 6:00:00 AM

A very creative haiku, Gail! I never thought of that- but upon reading it, yes that trail in the sky does look like scratch marks-- very nice! I see this won, so congrats to you!

Gail Debole
Date: 11/24/2012 4:41:00 PM

Hello Kaye - Thank you so much for stopping by to let me know your thoughts on this, and your acknowledgement! - Gail

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/21/2012 6:38:00 AM

Congrats on your winning work..I too observe those steaks of clouds..Sara

Gail Debole
Date: 11/24/2012 4:40:00 PM

Hi Sara - Thank you so much for your congrats! I just happened to be in the right inspirational place at the right time...so I consider myself lucky in that regard. - Gail

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/19/2012 9:50:00 PM

this truly was a BEST haiku of yours that you entered. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Gail Debole
Date: 11/24/2012 4:39:00 PM

Hi Andrea - Thank you so much for your acknowledgement! - Gail

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/19/2012 2:42:00 PM

Gail, :-) congratulations with your good enough haiku... xox~PD

Gail Debole
Date: 11/24/2012 4:38:00 PM

Hi PD - Thank you so much for your acknowledgement! - Gail

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/19/2012 12:41:00 PM

You captured the moment quite well in your succinct verse. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Gail Debole
Date: 11/24/2012 4:38:00 PM

Hello Matthew - I am glad that you like my poem! Thanks for stopping by to tell me. - Gail

Len Gasun

Date: 11/19/2012 10:03:00 AM

Many congratulations on your win my dear Gail! love/hugs, Leonora

Gail Debole
Date: 11/24/2012 4:37:00 PM

Hi Leonora - Thank you so much for your congratulatory note! - Gail

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/19/2012 1:48:00 AM

CONGRATS GAIL ON A FABULOUS WRITE AND WIN LUV .. REMINDS ME OF SKY WRITING JETS LONG AGO WHEN I WAS A CHILD LUV .. WISHING U AND FAMILY A VERY HAPPY AND BLESSED THANKSGIVING ..

Gail Debole
Date: 11/24/2012 4:36:00 PM

Hi S.H. - Thank you so much for your wonderful congratulatory note! I hope you and your family had a wonderful Thanksgiving! - Gail

Nathan D.

Date: 11/18/2012 9:37:00 PM

good haiku' Nate

Gail Debole
Date: 11/24/2012 4:34:00 PM

Hello Nate - I consider it an honor to have my poem ranked fifth in your contest! - Thank you, Gail

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2012 2:02:00 PM

wow, I know haiku are not supposed to be titled, but I love the title you put with this one. Great imagery in the poem.

Gail Debole
Date: 11/24/2012 4:31:00 PM

Hi Andrea - Thank you for the compliment about the title of this poem and the imagery! - Gail

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/23/2012 7:20:00 AM

like this awesome Haiku, Gail.

Gail Debole
Date: 11/24/2012 4:30:00 PM

Hi Harry - Glad you liked my poem! - Gail

Len Gasun

Date: 8/18/2012 3:12:00 AM

Nice one, Gail. I am so happy to read some of your work today. Thanks for your inspirational comments!

Gail Debole
Date: 11/24/2012 4:29:00 PM

Hi Leonora - Thank you for stopping by, and you are very welcome! - Gail

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/17/2012 10:59:00 AM

I felt the need to stop by your list of poetry today Gail. I wish to thank you for your kind words on my writing. Hope you have a wonderful weekend and hope to see you back here Monday. Love, Carol XX

Gail Debole
Date: 11/24/2012 4:29:00 PM

Hi Carol - Thank you for your never ending support! - Gail