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Scorful Song of Sorrow

A scornful Song thats' undesirable and unstoppable. Where our flesh holds a thousand stripped souls. Dimminshed by its inablity of resistance. Our mind and soul manipulated, and blurred from all source of benevolence. Abducted by this incarciration pulled by an abyss of departed spirits. We're compelled to compress into the compulsion of hellish proportions. And fed into our hearts'the compunction of betrayal and denial of his prime expectations. Departing from our flesh as were sitting at the core of ignited brimstones, our souls are surroneded by flames left deathless. With inflammation and suffocation surronding our nation.The trembles of it's terror are abruptly endless. Where screams are seen but not perceived the heavy splash of blood is but a scornful song of sorrow in the temple of his mercifulness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005




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Date: 2/23/2012 6:30:00 AM
You've typoed the title, I'm not convinced by your apostrophies. I found the scene you've set very graphic, and loved the use of so much vocabulary. It was a rare pleasure to read something of this style, enjoyed.
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