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Scorched Valentine

Scorched Valentine Lo, behold those cheeks Beside thee, dear, roses pale Red, red, oh so red! Found you, love, when day was done Gone to sleep ‘neath mountain sun Dave Austin

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Michael Smith

Date: 5/1/2012 7:30:00 PM

Nice classical love poem.

Cindy Lu

Date: 2/15/2012 12:17:00 PM

:) Very different. It's unique in the mechanics. good work. Cindy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2012 8:27:00 AM

Here it is again!! You never told me what inspired this vivid poem from you, my friend!! And you are so right, I need to just try one page at a time for a novel!!

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 2/12/2012 4:54:00 PM

Love this write, Daver! Well done, and musical to my ears. Best wishes, Caroline.

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/12/2012 2:10:00 PM

This has vivid imagery Daver ;) hope your Sunday is a brilliant one ;) love Wilma

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/12/2012 10:28:00 AM

good morning..Daver..how are WE..this morning.. lets light up the mood this Valentine... enjoyed your little free verse poem.... have a nice warm Sunday..always..pd

Daver Austin
Date: 2/13/2012 4:17:00 PM

Considering the temperature in these parts, I really appreciate your wish. Love, daver