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Scintillating Love

Enchanting scent of rose oil and neroli filled the air Her heart thumped with excitement sealed for eternity Sweet love had bloomed true and fair. Satin frills and lacy gloves adorned this lady very fair Warm cuddle and kiss of trust portrayed symbols of unity Enchanting scent of rose oil and neroli filled the air His adorable style, her bright smile, his wavy locks, her curly hair So intense and deep was this blend and angels blessed this love of purity Sweet love had blossomed true and fair Displayed their union-crispy themes of pleasure, submission and care Oath of commitment with emboldened spirit of veracity Enchanting scent of rose oil and neroli filled the air Disappeared without any trail behind,the saga of nightmare and great despair For tides of true love had in their life lashed with fullest capacity Sweet love had blossomed true and fair. Diamond ring in her finger added the everlasting feel to this graceful affair Fertile bonding of two humble souls and loving hearts sans vanity Enchanting scent of rose oil and neroli filled the air Sweet love had blossomed true and fair.

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Date: 8/11/2015 5:02:00 AM
When its good, its heavenly. When its bad its hellish and here the writing is good, the feeling is heavenly. Kind regards Ian
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Anu Nayak
Date: 8/11/2015 5:14:00 AM
Dear Ian Jones, I am very happy about your beautiful feedback:-)Thank you so very much:-) It means a lot of inspiration thanks again love n' luck, Anu:-)
Date: 7/29/2015 8:42:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your poetry this morning. Welcome to the Soup, you will add some wonderful flavour to the mix.
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Anu Nayak
Date: 7/29/2015 8:48:00 AM
Dear Richard Lamoureux, Thank you so very much for stopping to read my poems... Its a great pleasure to have supportive and encouraging people like you ... Once again thanks a lot love n' luck, Anulaxmi
Date: 7/19/2015 9:05:00 PM
Anulaxmi Nayak, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Anu Nayak
Date: 7/19/2015 11:28:00 PM
Hello LINDA! Thank you so much for your encouraging words ....iam.feeling myself too lucky too to have discovered this group ...friendship will continue ...your words of warmth means a lot for a novice like me loads of love -Anu:-)
Date: 7/19/2015 5:00:00 PM
just stopping by to give a second read, and say hello:)
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Anu Nayak
Date: 7/19/2015 11:22:00 PM
Hi SKAT, thank you so much from the bottom of my heart! I am so happy about all the love you pour:-) thanks once again hugs ANU:-)
Date: 7/19/2015 1:15:00 PM
Anulaxmi,, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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Anu Nayak
Date: 7/19/2015 1:23:00 PM
Hello SKAT, Thank u so very much for your warm welcome:-) This is my first poem of my lifetime which i posted hesitantly on this enriched platform of poets! Thank you so much for ur words of encouragement....friendship will surely continue!

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