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School Love

Together they walked, Hand in hand, In harmony of each others beauty, Whispering to each other with the sway of their walk, “This will last forever.” So much in love, So much devoted to one another, One last kiss, Before the school day ends, And the little girl, Softly starts giggling, And walks away.

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Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 5/14/2009 2:05:00 AM

Amanda, I really like the sentiments expressed there, it reminds so much of that time in my own life. Young love is so precious and you express it seloquently. P.S. Have you any Irish connections? My name is Déirdre Ó Maidín and the English translation is Déirdre Madden. Let me know - just curious

James Peranteau

Date: 5/13/2009 8:28:00 AM

Oh,...you're too much if you are young,..you've got that poetic touch many poets have to be schooled to trot ! Love it,..don't stop ! james

James Fraser

Date: 5/12/2009 11:52:00 AM

What a lovely poem about young love, and like Ernilando - i started drifting back in thought, beam me back Scotty, James.

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 5/10/2009 6:42:00 AM

Oh my goodness. This reminds me of my teen-age life many many years back. Thank you for making me feel brand new for a moment. lol. Ernilando

Pat Dickey

Date: 5/5/2009 11:21:00 AM

Ah,school love. Aren't they wonderful? I met my husband when he was 12 and I 11. Pushing 27 yrs of marriage. Love this reminiscence. And thank you so much for the comment.

Joanie Yeager

Date: 5/5/2009 6:47:00 AM

To cute =) but the sad truth is when the love ends and the pain ceast to move in..been there done that lol awsome poem chicka ~~^^Joanie^^~~