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Schizophrenia: A Collaboration with Myself

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Poetic Form: Dramatic Monologue
Inspired: 2024 February 23
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When I was one and twenty a moral with a twist ... They say I am the key that will unlock the cell yet how can I get free for I'm wrapped so well Don't wrap me or cell me just give me what THEY want At first, they say they want to heal me later, synonymous with 'heel' was fetching rather, they wanted to fix me like some 'thing' I was a bone to pick A puzzle to be taken apart I own lost and found I am finders losers weepers keepers I am crammed in a vacant space I can't catch my breath Whenever I speak I'm lost in translation So here I am amongst many unknowns and vultures who'd pick my bones the flower uprooted from weeds Doctors say I'm strange yet they study me ... I find that strange I say I hear and see things they say it's all in my head ... where else would it be I passed all their test reasons I am kept here They say that I do not give the wrong answers ... just the correct mistakes They go fishing in a fishbowl I am the hunted inferno Day and night they say when I might on a marked calendar on a wall ... what calendar I am ... that we are A lamb in want of lost Like the sounds of rubbing reeds I am the silent one I am a sailboat that arrives at doldrums subtle current ends A river does not rise for pleasure ... nor does a drowning soul Sometimes I just want to clam up but they will not let me ... neither will them I am a pearl they lust ... like a diamond and rust.

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Date: 2/24/2024 2:47:00 PM
brilliantly done! A masterpiece of creativity. I especially liked: I am finders losers weepers keepers. You have a unique mind and delightful poetic spirit. enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 2/24/2024 3:44:00 PM
I am delighted on your take with this ditty, Sara. Thank you so much, my friend. Aloha, William

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