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Schisms and Lapses

Ah the schism, the gap... the once electrically charged space that now, seems to hold only hollowness like a wicker effigy… before the offerings have been placed before the lamb as been brought to slaughter. The line between sanity and insanity blurrs water on glass. Laughter has never been a recourse not for me…taunting a perpetual bridegroom no release from sleepless nights but tears. What soothes my "weary wrinkled soul" naught but tears. Hold back the anger the misused fuel of fools. Waylay the rampant strands of kinder thoughts feed the seedling of understanding pity the blighted hearts. There can be no groom for the withered crone for time has come and wisdom was the choice life the sparkling firmament has reclaimed for your words ... your thoughts have oft called to me at night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/30/2011 4:50:00 PM
Well Debbie i can "feel" the humanity in this.. it makes one want to (reach out) you see...I am Human after all) Ha Ha,,i think i even suprised my self putting that in, no i think this is a real telling work 'specially liked (anger the missused fuel of fools) you may have been talking of me a few years ago.. your friend if you will Joe..!
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 11/30/2011 6:34:00 PM
man sometimes I think..who the h*ll wrote that..LOL..they're f*cking brilliant!
Date: 10/2/2011 9:16:00 AM
A thoughtful write...one to ponder.
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Date: 10/2/2011 6:24:00 AM
Interesting work..Not exactly sure what the work is about but some interesting lines like the last two..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Yes I wrestled with that one word in my poem "Winter's Nigh" but thought for what I was trying to convey that word would be better..Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/2/2011 2:45:00 PM
Yes, reread your work and I understood better..Our lives are filled with stress for sure..That is one kind of stress or another..Sara
Date: 10/1/2011 11:31:00 PM
Your soup mail answered. Deb
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