Scentsational Spring

Plentiful the scents Flowers of bright colors bloom Upon trees, by river bends In fields and meadows. Fiddle of the bees Silent dance of butterflies Upon the songs of swallows In concert style. Nature rejoices Because true love is in the air Breathe in as its wings deploy And find peace so fair. By CarolineCécile Copyright © 04.23.11

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Matthew Anish

Date: 5/7/2011 8:16:00 AM

Dear Caroline Liked the rfreshing taste of spring in this one but feel you should re work the last two lines. What country do you live in now? I have never been to Europe but hope to get there one of these days. Thanks so much for your comments on "The Last Jew on Earth". The other day I saw a Holocaust survivor speak and it messed me up for about a week! Continue with your writing and best of health to you and your. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

The Fringe

Date: 4/29/2011 9:38:00 PM

Nice visuals and descriptions. You captured this nicely.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/24/2011 12:00:00 AM

what a creative title for a very creative little spring poem!!

James Foulk

Date: 4/23/2011 6:08:00 PM

really loved this beautiful write, so relaxing to read nature poems. there was some great lines in this one the 5th line Fiddle of the bees, the 6th line Silent dance of butterflies and it goes on and on. a very well written piece. thank you for commenting on Quite Little Child.