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Scent of Us

what is there now my love after beating hearts dry wet skin pulsating lips whisper the moon to rise thighs wilt beneath the satin sun and we tuck into pillows, laced in the scent of us

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/1/2016 8:43:00 PM
mmmmm oh the joys! Love your words and the feelings you wrap me in every time!
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Mark Anthony Cotterman
Date: 9/8/2016 6:18:00 PM
oh now you have done it....am smiling ear to ear. thank you dear friend :)
Date: 8/23/2016 8:22:00 PM
Wow.......now this leaves no questions. Understated but ripe with passion. Well done!
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Mark Anthony Cotterman
Date: 8/24/2016 5:37:00 PM
oh my Carrie....not sure why but i just blushed
Date: 8/18/2016 2:17:00 PM
oh what wonderful sultry lines Mark ... this is hot hot hot:-) hugs Jan xx
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Mark Anthony Cotterman
Date: 8/19/2016 1:33:00 PM
oh my...did somebody turn up the heat in here??? :) thank you Jan!!!
Date: 8/17/2016 9:40:00 AM
Loving the last 2 lines especially Mark! :)
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Mark Anthony Cotterman
Date: 8/17/2016 9:47:00 AM
thank you kindly Laura :)
Date: 8/14/2016 8:18:00 PM
nice, hot
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Mark Anthony Cotterman
Date: 8/17/2016 9:27:00 AM
thank you Lewis

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