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Scent of Romance

The scent of romance Electrifies each fiber Sheer delirium!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/10/2013 6:07:00 PM
no title [use line 1 or a number like haiku #2] no capital letters except for Proper nouns ..and on this verse since the scent of romance it's not a good haiku line, you could put [the scent of ripe melon/rises from between the sheets -- the springs creak] see the difference? Light & Love [sensory...]
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Date: 11/29/2012 9:08:00 PM
Eleen, wow.. love the cheering view of it all.. always~ pd
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 11/30/2012 5:13:00 AM
Thanks ever so much for your lovely words of encouragement! I'm flying high! :)

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