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Scary Moments

When thunder howled to burn the sky as lighting rods seemed to betray, this night so bleak, it can’t defy wild rainstorm flooding streets in gray. Till darkness sprawled like ghostly frame when thunder howled to burn the sky, to crush each tree and post aflame and even drowning birds nearby. Lives feared the wrath of sea’s outcry for tempest burst on gates ,enraged when thunder howled to burn the sky invading more homes disarranged. I watched the sun clear lanes’ debris when daytime came pricked like cacti; a terror wiping city’s glee when thunder howled to burn the sky. Shadow Hamilton's Scary Moments *Snapshots of Haiyan Typhoon Disaster, 2013* Written 5/26/2014

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Date: 6/9/2014 10:08:00 AM
NETTE, Congrats on your Scary moment win. Thanks for sharing........Love Linda
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Date: 6/6/2014 6:06:00 PM
Really scary and a great poem. Should have been the top winner. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/6/2014 5:48:00 AM
Fantastic imagery. Love the line "a terror wiping city's glee" Those few words summarize the poem.
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Date: 6/5/2014 10:11:00 PM
I remember this one. Best imagery in the contest. Congrats to you
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Date: 6/5/2014 10:32:00 AM
great poem Nette congrats on place ty for taking part hugs
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Date: 6/5/2014 9:51:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine win in the contest, nette
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Date: 5/27/2014 7:33:00 AM
Excellent. Described well. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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Date: 5/26/2014 11:15:00 PM
Sounds frightening... I like storms bit not destructive ones... Beautifully described... Hugs Tim
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Date: 5/26/2014 9:55:00 PM
gosh did you just experience such a storm, Nette. It reads like something that you have just witnessed. Hope not. Today was so sunny and lovely over here. It was great to see you doing a quatern. Aren't they AWESOME?
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Date: 5/26/2014 3:12:00 PM
An expressive write where the ball was set rolling with a perfect first stanza! Imagery is such a faithful servant of yours! // paul
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Date: 5/26/2014 8:55:00 AM
Incredible imagery, Nette, and incredible writtin. You are so.....gifted. Lainie Also, thank you for your very kind comments. .
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Date: 5/26/2014 7:49:00 AM
- A gray and heavy day - but, afterwards so fresh and delicious - Beautifully described in your poem, Nette. - Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/26/2014 7:33:00 AM
wonderful write Nette,getting ready for the rains here too
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