Scarlet

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Sweet gum Three pronged leaves Foot like, dancing in breeze Hung upon the clothesline drips blood Scarlet

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2016 5:57:00 PM

Imaginative imagery here, Sara.

Paloma P

Date: 10/8/2016 9:35:00 AM

Nice imagery, so many ways to interpret this one.

Daniel Turner

Date: 10/7/2016 7:43:00 PM

They are beautiful aren't they? I just don't like those darn sweet gum balls. Wonderful imagery, Mrs Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/8/2016 6:44:00 AM

Well, what about those rooster feet?? I don't like those sweet gum balls either..I had bad fall once from stepping on one but due to my size I did not break any bones..I have enough padding to protect my bones..Thanks for stopping by..Sara