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Scared

Creeping Beeping I am sitting in a silent storm haunting taunting Your love is a mirror reflection of gold Each day i wait for your retaliation But you know me so well Calculated my every move You keep me at bay when you know that passion is at the door Your love makes me rise like dough bread in an oven Taste so good But too much of your love is poisonous I am hungry now Im like a bloodhound eating hearts for dinner Because i cannot have yours i will have to act like the Rozvi and destroy Everything in sight You mean so much to me Yet in my mind i kill you a thousand times but in my heart you live on Your love is as powerful as death I feel like i have died everyday waiting for you My oasis in the desert My light in the dark Thee one my hearts desire

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Date: 11/16/2016 7:23:00 AM
that is very beautiful writing, it's an honor reading such well written poetry.
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Date: 10/27/2016 10:41:00 AM
Rachel, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/26/2016 12:02:00 PM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Rachael. :)
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Rachael Chitondwe
Date: 10/28/2016 11:28:00 AM
Thank you

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