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Nature has painted you a moldy shade of green; and you're the ugliest scarecrow I've ever seen. A grotesque effigy in the image of man, you're a collage of rags on a rusty tin can. Stuffing has fallen out of your disheveled clothes, and you hang deflated; drooped in a ghoulish pose. You seem so comical; like a crazed circus clown that's skewed lopsidedly, and about to fall down. You have a sad-sack face too depressing for words; and yet, the crops are safe, and there's no sign of birds. (Quatrain) 9/18/2015

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Date: 3/14/2018 12:54:00 PM
Can't help but feel sorry for that ugly for faithful scarecrow. Lovely work, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/14/2018 2:00:00 PM
Thanks Line, your comments and support are much appreciated, Emile.
Date: 9/18/2015 6:36:00 PM
A well and an eloquent descriptive Emile. I love the flow of your wonderful write.....how it was constructed beautifully your seductive write put me in awe. Scarecrow is perfectly as you described it, but it fool those birds, to them its a man wanted to kill or capture them...lol!..... Your write is brilliant and excellent.......A.M.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/19/2015 8:19:00 AM
Thanks so much Afolabi, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 9/18/2015 1:20:00 PM
I am impressed by your scarecrow description, especially because I have tried to put the image in words, and failed. This is most clever and creative, I enjoyed it ... CayCay
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/18/2015 1:27:00 PM
Thank you for your great review CayCay, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 9/18/2015 12:08:00 PM
Excellent Emile. Clever and full of developed images that you allow us to enjoy. Your poetry always impresses me. Love your styles and your topics. A 7!
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/18/2015 2:23:00 PM
Thank you Cay Cay for your thoughts.
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/18/2015 2:23:00 PM
Emile your welcome.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/18/2015 1:28:00 PM
My deepest and sincere thanks Michael, for your words of praise and acknowledgment. Emile.
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Caycay Jennings
Date: 9/18/2015 1:22:00 PM
I agree with dictionary and guessing comment - totally agree ... CayCay
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/18/2015 12:14:00 PM
I guess when I say style. I mean your creative wording that is not over the top. It always conveys perfect descriptive thought. No guessing, or ambiguity in your writes. What good is a write that you have to guess to begin with and then have a dictionary for every other word. You can say some are more well versed but you know the masses want simplicity with depth, surprises, thought provoking. There are many styles. I respect that. For me its what you have here.

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