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Scare Me Good

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I see my child upon a swing and hear her giggles oh so clear. I want to run my hand in her hair and and tell her that I love her. The world today seems strangely cloaked . I call her name but I get no response. I turn around and an ambulance stands its blues and twos alight. I hear people scream and run to see a body lay perfectly still I look upon the bloodied ground and see its me And scream, but no one hears my ghostly scream . scare me good comp 02102016

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Date: 10/2/2016 8:40:00 AM
Hey Stephen ! You definitely need around of applause for that poem, wOw totally incredible and well written. I loved I just loved it ,it's quite a shock at the end which make the reading so much fun . Good work.
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 10/2/2016 10:40:00 AM
thank you , hope the judge likes it :-) stephen

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