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Scampering Squirrel's

scampering squirrel's steady sonorous screeching ~ golden ground glistens 18.01.2022 Syllables 5,7,5 checked at PS

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Date: 1/25/2022 1:04:00 PM
I like it, Rama! Congratulations!
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 1/29/2022 10:03:00 AM
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Date: 1/24/2022 10:47:00 PM
I just love to sit and watch the squirrels put on a show. We don’t have them here in Hawaii. Every time I visit California in the parks I get to watch them. Your haiku is a delight Rama. Congratulations on your podium win! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 1/25/2022 3:37:00 AM
A squirrel visits my balcony daily. He inspired me. Thanks
Date: 1/24/2022 8:56:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 1/25/2022 3:37:00 AM
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Date: 1/24/2022 10:02:00 AM
Rama, congratulations on your podium win! We have a backyard full of "scampering squirrels!" We do hear them screeching when they are agitated! Wonderfully done.
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Date: 1/25/2022 3:38:00 AM
Lucky you. They are a delight to watch! Thanks
Date: 1/24/2022 9:20:00 AM
Beautiful haiku. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/25/2022 3:38:00 AM
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Date: 1/24/2022 8:30:00 AM
Rama, congratulations on your podium placement with your cute and creative haiku with wonderful alliteration, I can just hear those squirrels!
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Date: 1/24/2022 8:34:00 AM
Thanks for the placement. Inspired by squirrels in my surrounding
Date: 1/20/2022 7:49:00 AM
- Lovely haiku, Rama ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/21/2022 6:38:00 AM
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Date: 1/19/2022 8:15:00 PM
Lovely alliterative haiku ! Now from a tree in our compound, I hear the steady sonorous screeching of squirrels ! :)
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Date: 1/21/2022 6:39:00 AM
Common in India. One squirrel comes to my balcony daily. It Inspired this
Date: 1/18/2022 7:50:00 AM
Perfect haiku with alliteration Rama. Best of luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 1/18/2022 8:08:00 AM
Thanks. Never confident with them.

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