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Scafell Pike

Cronking ravens’ aerobatics between rock-pulpits leaning over, grey disdainful gate-posts. Our shouts echoed as we clambered like ants on a wall, the lake a far glittering pool in the dark sunken floor of the world. On the saddle buttresses of old hostile crags hung vertiginously over an empty valley where brown snaking streams reflected the sky. When the fire died the night wrapped us in cold arms and stars like dust convened, aloof to the elegant comet and its silver veil. Next day, glad to be warm again, on a pass, the summit of the piled massif was a distant view in the sun’s torrent, another world visited, lonely, while people toiled earnestly up and down the tracks. When we’ve gone like empires before, these mountains would still be hunched under the rain and sun. But we ventured, searched from view to changing view, conquered, grew, and came back a little wiser to explore the wider wilderness 6.97

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Date: 3/19/2016 12:51:00 AM
well done, Piers. SKAT
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Date: 3/18/2016 6:16:00 PM
Awesome poem, Piers...enjoyed. Linda
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